You look very capable of doing more than shorts.
And I'd love to see some decent stuff as a result.
Don't mind my rating on this review too much, but I'm rather personally outspoken about the ending of this short.
Ah well, at least you could say that he died of an OD cocktail on all that crap, so that you can move on.
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Anyway...I thought that I'd give this a peek, and I'll say from seeing this that you definitely have a style for your animation, so build on it.
Just...uh...no retarded-I-I mean--different characters unless they absolutely have to be, hm?
-Kaffe Kane, loljudge Productions